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【DR】记忆炼成师(附科研发现)
« 于: 2020-08-17, 周一 16:47:03 »
记忆炼成师
记忆炼成师提取记忆,将记忆化为名为心雾的浓厚蒸汽储存起来。对他们而言回想过去的记忆就像喝药水一样简单。而经验丰富的记忆炼成师更能通过利用记忆中的创伤和胜利创造各种效果。

精神矛盾:记忆炼成师的炼金术依赖于自己的人格力量,他将心灵作为炼金实验室萃取和提纯别人的记忆。记忆炼成师用魅力替代智力决定化合炼成的效果和奖励炼成位,但仍然用智力满足公式的学习条件。此外每日魅调次,他可以将侦测思想作为类法术能力施展(最少每日一次)。
这调整了炼金术并取代随手投掷。

本心药剂(Su):记忆炼成师制造一种独特的突变药剂,名为本心药剂,它会抑制他的思维,让他进入一种纯净空灵的状态。在这种情况下记忆炼成师的适应力大大增强,但不能执行复杂的技能。一旦饮下本心药剂,记忆炼成师的三豁免获得+2炼金加值,并且每炼金师等级获得2临时HP,持续10m。但他的智力承受-2减值,且不能在此期间进行估价,手艺,解除装置,医疗,知识,专业,巧手或法辨检定。在其他任何方面上本心药剂一如突变药剂。
这取代突变药剂。记忆炼成师永远无法获得突变药剂或异变药剂或灵感神药,即使通过科研发现或别的职业也一样。

痛苦炸弹(Su):记忆炼成师用痛苦的记忆制造炸弹,造成非致命伤害。除了造成非致命伤害,痛苦炸弹如同普通的炼金炸弹。但它不会对无生命和心免目标造成伤害,而被炸弹击中的目标可以尝试意志豁免以减半伤害。记忆炼成师用魅力来计算炸弹伤害和豁免DC,但仍然用智力计算每日炸弹次数。如果记忆炼成师在过去24小时内受到任何HP伤害,那么他的痛苦炸弹每2炼金师等级多造成1点伤害。
这取代炼金炸弹。

记忆炼成:记忆炼成师可以从他人的记忆中炼成几种独特的化合炼成。2级时,他将安慰效应,讯息传递和思维回音作为一环公式加入公式书。5级时,他将侦测心像结界,心像门和改写灵光作为二环公式加入公式书。8级时,他将心智擦除和感知思维作为三环公式加入公式书。其中心智擦除的施法范围变为接触,且只能对无助或自愿的目标使用。
这取代毒素抗性。

自然移情(Ex):记忆炼成师的研究使他自然地关注他人。他在2级时获得灌注炼成作为奖励科研发现。
这取代用毒。

心灵感应(Su):10级起,每日魅调次,记忆炼成师可以以类法术能力施展精神质询(至少每日一次)。

科研发现

高等本心药剂:现在本心药剂令炼金师的三豁免获得+4炼金加值并获得每炼金师等级3临时HP,但效果持续期间他的智力承受-4减值(需要炼金师12级,本心药剂职业能力)。

究极本心药剂:现在本心药剂令炼金师的三豁免获得+6炼金加值并使其获得每炼金师等级4临时HP,但效果持续期间他的智力承受-6减值,感知和魅力承受-2减值(需要炼金师16级,高等本心药剂)。

痛苦炸弹*:炼金师可以制造造成精神伤害的炸弹,效果如同记忆炼成师的痛苦炸弹。

恐惧炸弹:你的痛苦炸弹中充满了惊怖和恐惧。被你痛苦炸弹伤害的目标惊惧1d6轮(意志豁免,过则战栗一轮,需要炼金师6级,痛苦炸弹职业能力或科研发现)。

绝望炸弹:你的痛苦炸弹还会对被其伤害的目标施加炼金师等级轮的极度绝望(意志豁免则减少到一轮,需要痛苦炸弹职业能力或科研发现,炼金师10级)。

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Mnemostillers extract memories, storing them as a thick vapor called mnemos. They can return memories as easily as administering a potion, and experienced mnemostillers create a variety of effects through the careful administration of past traumas or victories.

Mental Ambix: A mnemostiller’s alchemy relies on force of personality, using his own mind as an alchemy lab to draw and purify the mnemos collected from others. A mnemostiller uses his Charisma score in place of his Intelligence score for the purpose of extracts and bonus extracts. A mnemostiller still uses his Intelligence score to learn new formulae.

The mnemostiller can cast detect thoughts as a spell-like ability a number of times per day equal to his Charisma modifier (minimum 1).

This alters alchemy and replaces throw anything.

Rasugen (Su): A mnemostiller learns to brew a unique type of mutagen, called a rasugen, that suppresses his mind to enter a state of sublime purity. In this state, a mnemostiller becomes incredibly resilient, but cannot perform complex skills. Once imbibed, a rasugen grants a +2 alchemical bonus on all saving throws and 2 temporary hit points per alchemist level for 10 minutes per alchemist level. In addition, while the rasugen is in effect, a mnemostiller takes a –2 penalty to his Intelligence score and can’t attempt checks using Appraise, Craft, Disable Device, Heal, Knowledge (any), Profession, Sleight of Hand, or Spellcraft. This acts in all other ways like a mutagen.

This replaces mutagen. A mnemostiller can never gain the mutagen, cognatogen, or inspiring cognatogen ability, even from a discovery or another class.

Anguish Bomb (Su): A mnemostiller crafts his bombs from mnemos of pain and discomfort, inflicting psychic damage. An anguish bomb is identical to a bomb except that it deals nonlethal damage, it deals no damage to inanimate objects and creatures immune to mental effects, and creatures caught in the anguish bomb’s splash can attempt a Will save for half damage. A mnemostiller uses his Charisma score in place of his Intelligence score to determine the bonus damage of his anguish bomb and the save DC of the anguish bomb’s splash damage. He still uses his Intelligence score to determine his number of bombs per day. If the mnemostiller has taken any hit point damage in the past 24 hours, his anguish bombs inflict 1 additional point of nonlethal damage for every 2 alchemist levels he has.

This replaces bombs.

Brewed Memories: A mnemostiller can create several unique extracts from the mnemos he pulls from the minds of others. At 2nd level, he adds mindlink, placebo effect, and thought echo to his formula book as 1st-level extracts. At 5th level, he adds aura alteration, detect mindscape, and mindscape door to his formula book as 2nd-level extracts. At 8th level, he adds mindwipe and thoughtsense to his formula book as 3rd-level extracts; the range for a mindwipe extract becomes creature touched, and it can be applied only to a helpless or willing creature.

This replaces poison resistance.

Natural Empath (Ex): A mnemostiller’s studies naturally focus on others. He gains infusion as a bonus discovery at 2nd level.

This replaces poison use.

Mind-Delver (Su): At 10th level, a mnemostiller can use mind probe as a spell-like ability a number of times per day equal to his Charisma modifier (minimum 1).

科研发现原文
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Greater Rasugen (Distant Realms pg. 52): The alchemist’s rasugen now grants a +4 alchemical bonus on all saving throws, 3 temporary hit points per alchemist level, and immunity to mindaffecting effects. The alchemist takes a –4 penalty to Intelligence as long as the greater rasugen persists. An alchemist must be at least 12th level and able to brew a rasugen before selecting this discovery.

Grand Rasugen (Distant Realms pg. 52): The alchemist’s rasugen now grants a +6 alchemical bonus on all saving throws, 4 temporary hit points per alchemist level, and immunity to disease, mind-affecting effects, and poison. The alchemist takes a –6 penalty to Intelligence and a –2 penalty to Charisma and Wisdom as long as the grand rasugen persists. An alchemist must be at least 16th level and have the greater rasugen discovery before selecting this discovery.

Anguish Bomb* (Distant Realms pg. 52): You can throw bombs infused with psychic trauma. This discovery allows other alchemists to duplicate the anguish bombs used by mnemostillers.

Dread Bomb (Distant Realms pg. 52): Your anguish bombs are tainted with fear and dread. Creatures who take damage from your anguish bombs become frightened for 1d6 rounds. A target that succeeds at a Will saving throw is instead shaken for a single round. An alchemist must be 6th level and have the anguish bomb class feature or the anguish bomb discovery before selecting this discovery.

Melancholy Bomb (Distant Realms pg. 53): Your anguish bombs are filled with memories of sadness and regret. Creatures who take damage from your anguish bombs are also affected as per crushing despair for 1 round per alchemist level, or a single round if the target succeeds at a Will saving throw. An alchemist must be 10th level and have the anguish bomb class feature or the anguish bomb discovery before selecting this discovery.
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Re: 【DM】记忆炼成师(附科研发现)
« 回帖 #1 于: 2020-08-17, 周一 17:26:42 »
出自《遥远国度》(Distant Realms),那简称应该是DR

用魅力取代智力的炼金术师变体,只是取代的实在不够彻底 <_<

突变药剂、炼金炸弹没原版的好用 :o

能拿到“安慰效应”这个超实用的原异能法术,甚至还降为了1环,这点挺棒的 ^_^

看原文还和某个教派有关,背景方面非常充实

单论画风的话,算是中等偏上的变体
逼格这种事情,就看玩家自身的扮演发挥了
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Re: 【DM】记忆炼成师(附科研发现)
« 回帖 #2 于: 2020-08-17, 周一 17:28:25 »
出自《遥远国度》(Distant Realms),那简称应该是DR

用魅力取代智力的炼金术师变体,只是取代的实在不够彻底

突变药剂、炼金炸弹没原版的好用

能拿到“安慰效应”这个超实用的原异能法术挺棒的
画风与逼格呢

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Re: 【DR】记忆炼成师(附科研发现)
« 回帖 #3 于: 2020-08-17, 周一 19:55:13 »
一半智力一半魅力,做人又不能苟感知…
一个打非致命伤害、意志豁免减半伤害、还取代了炼金炸弹…呵呵
而且有一点很有趣, 炸弹的智力上伤害其实并不是炸弹的能力, 而是随手投掷的能力, 所以他其实是没有魅力上伤害这回事
不过没所谓了, 反正用这变体的都是有爱的人, 跟你的DM好好讨论吧
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« 回帖 #4 于: 2020-08-17, 周一 22:10:32 »
一半智力一半魅力,做人又不能苟感知…
一个打非致命伤害、意志豁免减半伤害、还取代了炼金炸弹…呵呵
而且有一点很有趣, 炸弹的智力上伤害其实并不是炸弹的能力, 而是随手投掷的能力, 所以他其实是没有魅力上伤害这回事
不过没所谓了, 反正用这变体的都是有爱的人, 跟你的DM好好讨论吧
这变体恐怕只有帅一个字......
理想的译法是这样的:先把原文看懂,照原文译出来,看看念不念得下去,试删掉几个不一定用得着的字,看看是否有损文义和文气。如果有损,再补回来。试把不可少的字加进去,看看是否超出原文范围,增减以后和原文再校对一次。有些地方是否译错,语气的轻重是否恰如其分,原文的弦外之音译文是找不找得到?原文的意思要消化;译文的文字要推敲。有经验的译者可能一下笔就译好了,不过还是要推敲的时候多。

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Re: 【DR】记忆炼成师(附科研发现)
« 回帖 #5 于: 2020-08-18, 周二 07:07:39 »
一半智力一半魅力,做人又不能苟感知…
一个打非致命伤害、意志豁免减半伤害、还取代了炼金炸弹…呵呵
而且有一点很有趣, 炸弹的智力上伤害其实并不是炸弹的能力, 而是随手投掷的能力, 所以他其实是没有魅力上伤害这回事
不过没所谓了, 反正用这变体的都是有爱的人, 跟你的DM好好讨论吧
域和灵能和传奇系列不会还要一年半载吧……